Angel of Death

Hello Ash! Another wonderfully written entertaining chapter. There is really nothing to complain about, so I'm beginning to feel as though I am of no help but hopefully this outrageously ...

This was good! I read the first part of the story that you posted before, and its nice to read more about your characters. The only thing I would suggest ...

This was a great chapter! I'm glad Isaac and Sophia are back together. Wow, action and romance, great mixtures. There isn't really anything wrong with this but I really really ...

Its been a long time, eh? Well, I liked this poem but I felt that it could be so much more. This is a very powerful subject and it felt ...

Ah, this was a very sweet chapter. I love Vick! There wasn't any jump-out problems that I saw, but I'm just sad that I have to wait till after the ...

Hello again dear, My, this story is touching my heart with its tiny cool fingers. I can feel it and the way you write is so passionate. I really feel ...

Hello CastleInTheSky, Don't believe we've met before, but I'm Angel of Death, I prefer Angel though. *waves* This was a very beautiful prologue and I'm not sure I've read anything ...

I love Vance! He loves to read, he loves poetry, and he doesn't play with emotions. He is a dream come true and you wrote him very well. Usually, when ...

Hello there! I saw this on here awhile ago but I never really finished it till now. First off, I must say, as a patron of Romantic Fiction for a ...

Sorry I got to this late, KJ. Well, I loved this chapter and I didn't find anything to nitpick about, which is good. The plot is really starting to pick ...

Hey Oink Oink! This was a lovely poem and I didn't see anything wrong. Usually I don't like poems that don't rhyme but this was beautiful and it deserves a ...

Hey Over! I haven't read anything from you in a while, but this was great. I love dramatic poetry and this poem really has a voice. I especially like the ...

Hey Ky! How've you been? I hope the editing process TEB is going well. ^_^ This piece made me smile a lot. Its just you and what good be make ...

Bravissimo!! I have been waiting for this for so long and I am so glad that you finally posted this. There weren't any major problems, but this was an enjoyable ...

This was the saddest chapter I've ever read. As always, though it was a great chapter. I really can't give a good critique, because I didn't ever think that Isaac ...